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I prefer sleeping alone.
I feel stuffy sleeping with someone at one bed.
If I awake once I couldn’t sleep again although it is midnight.
Such as one of my menopausal symptom.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Why am I agreeing with this? haha!
Anyway, sleep should be one of the most comfortable times people should have. We have to enjoy the moment of resting so when we face a new day, we won\'t be saying that we are \"tired\"
Aki~
I prefer sleeping alone.
>>> CORRECT!
I feel stuffy sleeping with someone at one bed.
>>> I feel stuffy sleeping with someone in one bed.
If I awake once I couldn’t sleep again although it is midnight.
>>> If I awake once I can’t sleep again although it is midnight.
Such as one of my menopausal symptom.
>>> Such as one of my menopausal symptoms.
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