homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to explain to the situation on today\'s class.
I went to an amusement park a couple years ago and bought an annual tikets for my children.
We were allowed to enter for free for one year, but we played all day first & second days to get my money\'s worth.
After that we did\'t go there because we were fed up.
thank you~
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jim!
Enjoying the ride for two straight days is not bad at all for an annual ticket. If your kids enjoyed it, then, you can buy an annual ticket again next time.
As you can see here on your sentences, you had correct ones. I am happy that you are doing more and more efforts to fix your grammar so that you can speak correctly especially in the next coming weeks in Malaysia. So study my grammar suggestions and see you again in class for your next homework answer. Great job!
See you!
-T. Donna~
>> I want to explain the situation for today\'s class.
I went to an amusement park a couple years ago and bought an annual tikets for my children.
I went to an amusement park a couple years ago and bought an annual tikets for my children.
>> I went to an amusement park a couple of years ago and bought an annual ticket for my children.
We were allowed to enter for free for one year, but we played all day first & second days to get my money\'s worth.
>> We were allowed to enter for free for one year, but we played all day first and also for the second day to get my money\'s worth.
After that we did\'t go there because we were fed up.
>> Correct!
thank you~
thank you~
>> Correct!
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