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What I love to do outside is I like to do activities that move my body. For example, I like to take a walk, climb a mountain, and exercise.
I feel good and healthy when I move my body. So I spend the day working and exercising during the week. I usually spend the weekend with my husband. I go up the mountains, look around the city, or go to the market together.
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Hi, Mia. You have shared what activities you do when you are outside. You have a very interesting and exciting routine. Job well done! ^^
-Khai
What I love to do outside is I like to do activities that move my body.
What I love to do outside is I like to do activities that move my body.
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>> I love to do activities that would require me to move my body.
For example, I like to take a walk, climb a mountain, and exercise.
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>> For example, I like walking, climbing a mountain and exercising.
I feel good and healthy when I move my body.>> CORRECT
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>> When I move my body, I feel good and healthy.
So I spend the day working and exercising during the week.
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>> So I spend my weekday working and exercising.
I usually spend the weekend with my husband.
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>> On weekends, I spend my time with my husband.
I go up the mountains, look around the city, or go to the market together.
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>> I climb the mountains, do some sightseeing in the city, or visit the market together with him.
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