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학생이 쓴 원문
1. Summer and winter are long in Korea. Spring and autumn are very few.
2. It will get hotter and colder in summer and winter. It also causes inconvenience in everyday life.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ji[이름]!
Indeed, the extremes of summer and winter can make daily life a bit challenging. It\'s always a balancing act between staying cool in the heat and warm in the cold.
~ Teacher Maxine
Summer and winter are long in Korea. Spring and autumn are very few.
>> Summer and winter are lengthy in Korea, while spring and autumn are brief.
It will get hotter and colder in summer and winter.
>> Temperatures rise significantly in summer and drop drastically in winter.
It also causes inconvenience in everyday life.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It leads to inconveniences in daily life.
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