Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: What country would you like to try visiting alone? Why?
A: I would try to visit New Zealand alone.
I don\'t actually care if I go alone or with my family, but I would like to go there someday, and I\'d like to see a lot of species in there.
I actually want to go a lot of place where has a good atmosphere.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes to consider:
1. I would try to visit New Zealand alone.
>>CORRECT!
2. I don\'t actually care if I go alone or with my family, but I would like to go there someday, and I\'d like to see a lot of species in there.
>>I don\'t actually care if I go there alone or with my family, but I would like to go there someday and see a lot of species in there.
3. I actually want to go a lot of place where has a good atmosphere.
>>I actually want to go to a lot of places with good atmosphere.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.