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2024-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Maxine

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I got up late therefore I went to school late. My teacher said \"Your naturally face and skin is the most beautiful.\" to some girls I learned about variety of animal in science class. The budget of my class was remained then me, classmates and teacher ate Stir-fried rice cake Our PE teacher said \"You are have to enhance your Physical strength

강사 첨삭

Hello, Henry!
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~ Teacher Maxine

I got up late therefore I went to school late.
>> I got up late, therefore, I went to school late.

My teacher said \"Your naturally face and skin is the most beautiful.\" to some girls
>> My teacher said, \"Your natural face and skin are the most beautiful,\" to some girls.
EXAMPLE: My teacher complimented some girls by saying, \"Your faces and skin look naturally beautiful.

I learned about variety of animal in science class.
>> I learned about a variety of animals in science class.

The budget of my class was remained then me, classmates and teacher ate Stir-fried rice cake
>> The budget of my class remained, so my classmates, teacher, and I ate stir-fried rice cake.

Our PE teacher said \"You are have to enhance your Physical strength
>> Our PE teacher said, \"You have to enhance your physical strength.

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