Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Not to get closer to burnout throughout your life.
You have to spend so much time and money that you can\'t put it into words to get it!!!
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ji[이름]!
It\'s indeed necessary to take care of our condition. Self-care and time management could help avoid burnout.
~ Teacher Maxine
Not to get closer to burnout throughout your life.
>> To prevent getting closer to burnout throughout your life.
You have to spend so much time and money that you can\'t put it into words to get it!!!
>> CORRECT!
OR >> You need to invest so much time and money that it\'s hard to describe the effort required to achieve it!
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