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One of my favorite shopping mall stores is the food store. There are many things to see and buy in the food store, such as meat corner, fish corner, stack corner, vegetable corner, and beverage corner. It is convenient because there are not only food stores but also movie theaters, clothing stores, electronics stores, and restaurants in the shopping mall.
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Nice work, Mia. I enjoy going to food stores too like you! ^^
-Khai
One of my favorite shopping mall stores is the food store.
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>> I really like going to food stores in shopping malls.
There are many things to see and buy in the food store, such as meat corner, fish corner, stack corner, vegetable corner, and beverage corner.
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>> There are many things to choose and buy in the food store. These are meats, fish, stacks, vegetables and beverages.
It is convenient because there are not only food stores but also movie theaters, clothing stores, electronics stores, and restaurants in the shopping mall.
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>> Other than food stores, there are other shops in the mall such as movie theaters, clothing stores, electronic stores and restaurants.
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