Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If i am a sales person, i will offer our products to clients with description presentation.
And i am going to meet them for explain our products how they will get benefit to use our products.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Peter!
As a salesperson, it\'s crucial to effectively communicate the benefits of our products to clients. Your approach of providing detailed presentations and explaining how our products can benefit them is commendable. Keep up the good work!
~ Teacher Maxine
If i am a sales person, i will offer our products to clients with description presentation.
>> If I were a salesperson, I would offer our products to clients with a descriptive presentation.
And i am going to meet them for explain our products how they will get benefit to use our products.
>> And I am going to meet with them to explain how they will benefit from using our products.
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