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I hate summer very much, because in summer,
there are wild boars and it is so hot that my whole boby is full of sweat.
That\'s why I get annoyed every summer.
But Korean summer sentiments are the best.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your corrected composition, Luna.
I appreciate your sending it. See you again next week!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Write about your typical summer.
I hate summer very much, because in summer,
there are wild boars and it is so hot that my whole boby is full of sweat.
>> I hate summer very much because during this time, there are wild boars and it\'s so hot that my whole body is full of sweat.
That\'s why I get annoyed every summer.
>> OR: That\'s why I feel very irritated whenever summer comes.
But Korean summer sentiments are the best.
>> CORRECT~~
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