Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree with Alice\'s opinion because wearing only expensive clothes can not be matched. Peaple have to find clothes which is matched and comfortable to them. If they wear them they can get confidence.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Henry!
It\'s important for individuals to choose clothing that not only suits their personal style but also feels comfortable. Confidence often comes from feeling good in what we wear, regardless of the price tag. Thank you for sharing your perspective!
~ Teacher Maxine
>> I agree with Alice\'s opinion because wearing only expensive clothes cannot guarantee a perfect match.
Peaple have to find clothes which is matched and comfortable to them.
>> People have to find clothes that match their style and are comfortable for them.
If they wear them they can get confidence.
>> If they wear clothes that fit these criteria, they can gain confidence.
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