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when I tried new food, I’m worried before eat it. Because I don’t want to spoil the meal.
And I don’t want to throw my money when I ate not delicious food.
So I just try new food sometimes.
If I find delicious foods by someone, It is best!
You know these days Mara-tang is popular food in Korea from a few years ago.
Mara-tang is Chinese food and mara is burning ingredient.
When I tried the food the first time, It was soso..
But It’s very addictive food like I though it more after experienced the food.
So it is my one of favorite food.
If you like spicy food, I recommend it!
강사 첨삭
Hi Su,
Mara-tang is Chinese food and mara is burning ingredient.
But It’s very addictive food like I though it more after experienced the food.
So it is my one of favorite food.
If you like spicy food, I recommend it!
We have the same sentiments. I\'m also worried about trying out new food because I don\'t want to be disappointed and waste my money. Maybe you can tell me more about Mara-tang later. It sounds delicious. ^^
-Teacher Ash
when I tried new food, I’m worried before eat it. Because I don’t want to spoil the meal.
>> When I am trying new food, I feel worried because I don\'t want to be disappointed.
And I don’t want to throw my money when I ate not delicious food.
>> I also don\'t want to waste my money when the food is not delicious.
So I just try new food sometimes.
>> So, I just try new food sometimes.
If I find delicious foods by someone, It is best!
>> Before trying out new foods, I make sure they are the best.
You know these days Mara-tang is popular food in Korea from a few years ago.
>>These days Mara-tang is popular in Korea.
Mara-tang is Chinese food and mara is burning ingredient.
>> Mara-tang is a Chinese food and \"mara\" means burning.
When I tried the food the first time, It was soso..
>> When I tried the food for the first time, I thought it was so-so.
But It’s very addictive food like I though it more after experienced the food.
>> However, I eventually became addicted to it.
So it is my one of favorite food.
>> So, it\'s one of my favorite foods now.
If you like spicy food, I recommend it!
>> CORRECT
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