Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
The difficulty of raising a pet was training to cover feces and urine.
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>> Cleaning the feces and urine is part of the difficulty of raising a pet.Here are some ways I can train Marong at home.
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>> Here are some ways that I trained Marong at home.
All the ways I trained Marongi were watching videos of YouTube dog trainers and imitating her.
>> All the ways I trained Marongi were by watching videos of YouTube dog trainers and imitating her.
First, I organized all the carpets in my house in the closet before training to cover my dog\'s poop and pee.
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>> First, I kept all the carpets in my house before training to teach my dog where to poop and pee.
Then, I placed several pads, and gave Marong a meal or a snack, complimenting her when she peed on the pads.
>> Then, I placed several pads and gave Marong a meal or a snack, complimenting her when she peed on the pads.
Second, it is training to wait until the owner orders it.
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It is training to eat when the owner says \"eat\" while waiting while waiting even though there is something to eat right in front of you.
>> It is training to eat when the owner says \"eat\" while waiting, even though there is something to eat right in front of you.
Third, giving kisses to the owner, high-fiving with hands, sitting down or lying down.
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>> Third are gestures such as giving kisses to the owner, doing high-fives, sitting down, or lying down.
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