Homework
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Q: What do you think about the future of movies and plays?
A: I think movies can develop more, but I think plays won\'t be developed that much.
Nowadays, a lot of people watch movies, but not plays, so plays might be developed, but I think probably they won\'t be.
And since a lot of people watch movies, I think they will be developed.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. Nowadays, a lot of people watch movies, but not plays, so plays might be developed, but I think probably they won\'t be.
3. And since a lot of people watch movies, I think they will be developed.
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Here are some notes:
1. I think movies can develop more, but I think plays won\'t be developed that much.
>>CORRECT!
2. Nowadays, a lot of people watch movies, but not plays, so plays might be developed, but I think probably they won\'t be.
>>Nowadays, a lot of people watch movies but not plays so plays must be developed, but I think they won\'t be.
3. And since a lot of people watch movies, I think they will be developed.
>>Since a lot of people watch movies, I think they will be developed.
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