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Q: What would life be like without books?
A: I think it could\'ve been boring if it was few years ago.
But for now, I think it won\'t actually matter that much because there are a lot more people looking at phones instead of books.
But still there are a lot of people reading books or using books, so I think it could matter for some.
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2. But for now, I think it won\'t actually matter that much because there are a lot more people looking at phones instead of books.
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Here are some considerations:
1. I think it could\'ve been boring if it was few years ago.
>>I think it would\'ve been boring if it was a few years ago.
2. But for now, I think it won\'t actually matter that much because there are a lot more people looking at phones instead of books.
>>For now, I think it won\'t actually matter that much because there are more people looking at their phones instead of books.
3. But still there are a lot of people reading books or using books, so I think it could matter for some.
>>Still, there are a lot of people reading books or using books, so I think it could matter for some.
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