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I don\'t know about the special event,
but we played fountain in the park in front of my house.
It\'s really fun to go with my friends.
But it\'s not open now.
I don\'t know why.
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Jean~~
Are there any special events that take place in summer in your country? What are they? Write about at least one or two events.
I don\'t know about the special event,
but we played fountain in the park in front of my house.
>> I don\'t know about special events but my friends and I played at the fountain in the park in front of my house.
It\'s really fun to go with my friends.
>> It\'s really fun to go there with my friends.
But it\'s not open now.
>> OR: However, the fountain is closed these days.
I don\'t know why.
>> OR: I have no idea why it\'s not open.
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