Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t know I understand alright. If the issues caused by celebrities are about illegal or bad things or to give positive affect is should affect many people.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Henry!
It\'s important to consider both the positive and negative impacts of celebrity behavior. Issues caused by celebrities, whether they involve illegal or negative actions, can indeed have a significant influence on society.
~ Teacher Maxine
I don\'t know I understand alright.
>> I\'m not sure if I understand completely.
If the issues caused by celebrities are about illegal or bad things or to give positive affect is should affect many people.
>> If the issues caused by celebrities involve illegal or negative actions, or if they are meant to have a positive impact, they can affect many people.
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