Homework
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Oh It\'s my mistake. I changed my homework yesterday and the day before yesterday. I\'m so Sorry!
What are the countries that you want to visit for holiday?
>> I wanna go to Italy. Recently I watched a program in youtube. They enjoyed wine festival and tourist attraction in Italy. There are a lot of vineyards. And they have beautiful street. It was impressive for me. So someday If I get enough money in Australia, I hope go to the Italy after working holiday!
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Hi Su,
No worries. It happens. ^^
-Teacher Ash
I wanna go to Italy.
>> I want to go to Italy.
Recently I watched a program in youtube.
>> I recently watched a program in YouTube.
They enjoyed wine festival and tourist attraction in Italy.
>>People were enjoying the tourist attraction and the wine festival in Italy.
There are a lot of vineyards.
>>There were a lot of vineyards.
And they have beautiful street.
>>They also have beautiful streets.
It was impressive for me.
>>I was impressed.
So someday If I get enough money in Australia, I hope go to the Italy after working holiday!
>>So, someday when I earn enough money in Australia, I plan to go to Italy.
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