Homework
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Q: Is reading a book better than watching a movie version of it? Why?
A: I think it depends on the situation.
Because people sometimes want to feel excited or sometimes they want to relax, and the kind matters on the situation.
But I think movies are replacing books more and more.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. Because people sometimes want to feel excited or sometimes, they want to relax, and the kind matters on the situation.
3. But I think movies are replacing books more and more.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some considerations:
1. I think it depends on the situation.
>>CORRECT!
2. Because people sometimes want to feel excited or sometimes, they want to relax, and the kind matters on the situation.
>>People sometimes want to feel excited or sometimes relaxed, and the interest matters on the situation.
3. But I think movies are replacing books more and more.
>>But I think movies are replacing books more and more nowadays.
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