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학생이 쓴 원문
I eat delicious food.
I think we spend less time contacting each other because we strive for our dreams.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ji[이름]!
That\'s a great mindset to have! It\'s important to prioritize our dreams and goals. Even if friends don\'t talk as often, they\'d be glad to see you\'re focused and working hard towards your aspirations.
~ Teacher Maxine
I eat delicious food.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I enjoy eating tasty food.
I think we spend less time contacting each other because we strive for our dreams.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I believe our reduced communication is due to our dedication to pursuing our dreams.
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