homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) What do you like best?
2) When does Bill get up in the morning?
3) Why don't you go by bus, Max?
4) What hobbies does Andrew have?
5) Where do they go to every week?
My work locates in the mountain.
Sometimes my mobile phone doesn't receive a call.
My mobile phone is strage today.
It can receive a call but it can't use the internet on my phone.
I couldn't use my mobile phone messenger KaKaotalk.
I called my telecom service center but they said not to have any problem in their service.
I was angry but I couldn't do anything about that.
I worry about our class. If I don't take your call, I ask to be excused in advance.
강사 첨삭
It\'s a TGI Friday agian Miss. [Name]!!
And I\'m so sorry for what happened to your mobile phone..
Maybe the signal is just bad in your workplace because whenever we have our class, usually there is no problem..
So just relax my dear okay? Or better yet, buy a new phone, kkkk..:)
Talk to you again later my dear Miss. [Name]..
Teacher Cam^^
1) What do you like best? >>correct2) When does Bill get up in the morning? >>correct3) Why don\'t you go by bus, Max? >>correct4) What hobbies does Andrew have? >>correct5) Where do they go to every week?>>correctMy work locates in the mountain.
>>My work is located in the mountain.Sometimes my mobile phone doesn\'t receive a call.
>>correct
>>Sometimes my mobile phone has a bad reception.My mobile phone is strage today.
>>correct (strange)It can receive a call but it can\'t use the internet on my phone.
>>I can receive some calls but I can\'t use the internet.I couldn\'t use my mobile phone messenger KaKaotalk.
>>correct
>>I couldn\'t even use my mobile phone messenger Kakaotalk.I called my telecom service center but they said not to have any problem in their service.
>>I called my telecom service regarding my problem but they said that everything was fine.I was angry but I couldn\'t do anything about that.
>>correctI worry about our class. If I don\'t take your call, I ask to be excused in advance.
>>I worry about our class because I might not receive your call but I will just ask for an excuse in advance.
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