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2024-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, teacher Sharon! This is your student, Irene. The reason that signed up for Power English is just passing the enter exam of foriegn language school. However, I felt that I was happy while I was talking with you. So, I\'m reading the next unit of our textbook now! I can\'t wait for our next class. Then, have a good night! Irene, Si[이름] Park.

강사 첨삭

Hi Irene!
You did so well today.
Thank you for your composition.
I also had fun with you.
Just ask me anytime if you need help or you have a question.
I will make sure you learn a lot and have fun during the class.
Take care!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The reason that signed up for Power English is just passing the enter exam of foriegn language school. 
>> The reason that I signed up for Power English was just to pass the entrance exam to a foreign language school. 
However, I felt that I was happy while I was talking with you. 
>> Correct
So, I\'m reading the next unit of our textbook now! 
>> Correct
I can\'t wait for our next class. 
>> Correct
Then, have a good night!
>> Correct

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