Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
1. commitment
Another company broke the commitment that they sent the deposit by yesterday. So, we are under the emergency.
2. concede
The officer made a mistake, so my mother explaned her fault logically. She conceded her mistake and apologided to my mother.
3. conscientious
If you were interviewer, which applicants do you preper? One group of applicants is conscientious worker but lack of work skill. another group's applicants have a good skill but they are very egoist. What is your choice?
4. cousin
I have a eleven uncles and 5 aunts. I can not count my cousin's number.
5. debt
One of the metro company in Seoul makes a plan to raise a subway fee. Because they have a serious debt. It is a social problem. and final victim is a Seoul citizen. Even subway fee is not increse, government has to support this company using our texes.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday!^^ Thank you for doing your homework on time. I am very happy to see your improvement each week. Each day, I get more and more impressed by your speaking ability. To enhance your English writing skills further, here are some corrections that you have to review and consider. I hope you\'ll find them useful in your daily conversations. Take care and enjoy the night away!
~Teacher Faye
1. commitmentAnother company broke the commitment that they sent the deposit by yesterday.
>>Another company broke the commitment that they sent the deposit yeaterday.
So, we are under the emergency.
>>So, we are under emrgency. OR
>>That\'s why we are on an emergency.2. concedeThe officer made a mistake, so my mother explaned her fault logically.
>>The officer made a mistake so my mother explained her fault logically.
She conceded her mistake and apologided to my mother.
>>She conceded to her mistake and apologized to my mother. 3. conscientious If you were interviewer, which applicants do you preper?
>>If you were an interviewer, which group of applicants would you prefer?
One group of applicants is conscientious worker but lack of work skill, another group\'s applicants have a good skill but they are very egoist.
>>One group of applicants is composed of conscientious but unskilled workers while another group consists of skilled but egoistic workers.
What is your choice?>>Correct! OR
>>Which would you choose?
4. cousin I have a eleven uncles and 5 aunts.
>>I have eleven uncles and five aunts.
I can not count my cousin\'s number.>>I can not count the number of my cousins. OR
>>I can not count how many cousins I have.
5. debtOne of the metro company in Seoul makes a plan to raise a subway fee. Because they have a serious debt.
>>One of the metro companies in Seoul makes a plan to raise the subway fee because they have a serious debt. OR
>>One of the metro companies in Seoul is making a plan to raise the subway fee because they have a serious debt.
It is a social problem. and final victim is a Seoul citizen.
>>It is a social problem and the final victims are the citizens of Seoul.
Even subway fee is not increse, government has to support this company using our texes.
>>Even if subway fee doesn\'t increase, the government has to support the company in using our taxes.
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