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The best movie I\'ve ever seen is \"Star is Born\".
>> The best movie I\'ve ever seen was \"Star is Born\".
My daughter recommended it, so I watched it on Netflix.
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>> My daughter told me to check out this movie, so I watched it on Netflix.
The music of this movie is really cool.
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>> The songs in the movie were really cool.
There are a lot of songs in the movie, and they were all [이름]g live by Lady Gaga and Bredley Cooper, who are the main characters.
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>> The songs were [이름]g by main characters portrayed by Lady Gaga and Bradley Cooper.
Bradley Cooper\'s performance was very impressive.
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>> Bradley Cooper\'s performance was very commendable.
He showed a realistic performance from his miserable state of being addicted to alcohol and drugs.
>> He acted well and he was in the character of being addicted to alcohol and drugs.Lady Gaga was also amazingly perfect in both singing and acting.
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>> Lady Gaga portrayed her role perfectly as she was good at singing and acting.
I cried a lot when Lady Gaga sang the ending song.
>> I was in tears during the ending scene when Lady Gaga sang.
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