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2024-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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Q:Do you like receiving letters? Why or why not? A: If it\'s just sometimes, it won\'t matter but if it\'s too much, then it won\'t be good. For me, I only receive letters in occasions so it doesn\'t really matter for now, but I actually easily get bored in reading things, so if there\'s too much letters to read, then I wouldn\'t feel that good. But usually I just like receiving letters.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for answering your homework. Enjoy your weekend!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes to consider:

1. If it\'s just sometimes, it won\'t matter but if it\'s too much, then it won\'t be good.
>>If it\'s just sometimes, then it won\'t matter that much but if it\'s too much, then it won\'t be good.

2. For me, I only receive letters in occasions so it doesn\'t really matter for now, but I actually easily get bored in reading things, so if there\'s too much letters to read, then I wouldn\'t feel that good.
>>I only receive letters during occasions, so it doesn\'t really matter for now, but I actually easily get bored in reading things. So, if there are too many letters to read, then I won\'t feel that good.

3. But usually I just like receiving letters.
>>But usually, I like receiving letters.

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