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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are some common superstitions about good luck and bad luck in your country?
There are many funny superstitions in Korea.
General people believe it lightly.
But, sometimes who believe in Korea shamanism are too much believe.
Anyway, I\'ll introduce Korea superstitions about good luck and misfortune.
Common good luck mean is that if a pig comes in our dream, we will win the lottery.
That\'s why, some Asia countries, pigs has symbol of good luck.
And case of in my country, the pronunciation of the Korean style Chinese word for pig is \"DON\".
This pronunciation is the same Korean word for money, so pigs are also symbol of fortune in Korea.
Next, there are many superstitions that mean has bad luck.
For example, we shouldn\'t eat seaweed soup when we prepare for an exam.
The reason is the seaweed is a slippery food, so student fail because they slip and fail on the exam if they eat.
But my mom gave me seaweed soup to me before an exam day.
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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are some common superstitions about good luck and bad luck in your country?
There are many funny superstitions in Korea.
Please answer the question:
What are some common superstitions about good luck and bad luck in your country?
There are many funny superstitions in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
General people believe it lightly.
>> Generally, people believe in it lightly.
But, sometimes who believe in Korea shamanism are too much believe.
>> But sometimes, Koreans who believe in shamanism tend to do it too much.
Anyway, I\'ll introduce Korean superstitions about good luck and misfortune.
>> CORRECT!
Common good luck mean is that if a pig comes in our dream, we will win the lottery.>> Common good luck means that if a pig comes in our dream, we will win the lottery.
That\'s why, some Asia countries, pigs has symbol of good luck.
>> That\'s why, in some Asian countries, pigs are a symbol of good luck.
And case of in my country, the pronunciation of the Korean style Chinese word for pig is \"DON\".
>> And in the case of my country, the pronunciation of the Chinese word for pig is \"DON\" (in Korean).
This pronunciation is the same Korean word for money, so pigs are also symbol of fortune in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
Next, there are many superstitions that mean has bad luck.
>> Next, there are many superstitions that means bad luck.
For example, we shouldn\'t eat seaweed soup when we prepare for an exam.
>> CORRECT!
The reason is the seaweed is a slippery food, so student fail because they slip and fail on the exam if they eat.
>> The reason is that the seaweed is a slippery food, so students fail because they slip and fail on the exam if they eat it.
But my mom gave me seaweed soup to me before an exam day.
>> But my mom gave me seaweed soup before the exam day.
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