Homework
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Q: If you are to build your own company, what would it be and why?
A: I think it would be a game company.
For now, a lot of video games are trending, and there are a lot of cases which people earned lots of money from a video game.
Also, I\'m interested in programming, so it would be helpful.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. For now, a lot of video games are trending, and there are a lot of cases which people earned lots of money from a video game.
3. Also, I\'m interested in programming, so it would be helpful.
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina
Here are some points to consider:
1. I think it would be a game company.
>>CORRECT!
2. For now, a lot of video games are trending, and there are a lot of cases which people earned lots of money from a video game.
>>For now, a lot of video games are trending, and there are a lot of cases of people earning lots of money from video games.
3. Also, I\'m interested in programming, so it would be helpful.
>>CORRECT!
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