Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
[Writing Task] What has been your scariest moment so far? Kindly answer in 3 to 5 sentences.
The moment when my daughter had panic disorder symtoms. She felt she really couldn’t breath well and was going to die. It was my scariest moment to me.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you for finding time to accomplish your homework.
Panic disorder causes frequent and unexpected panic attacks.
These attacks are characterized by a rapid surge of panic, discomfort, or a sense of losing control, even without an obvious risk or trigger.
I hope your daughter won\'t have any episodes in the future.
I will talk to you again tomorrow. See you!
__T. Mayleen :)
The moment when my daughter had panic disorder symtoms.
>>> The moment when my daughter had a panic disorder attack.
She felt she really couldn\'t breath well and was going to die.
>>> She couldn\'t breathe well, and she thought she was going to die.
It was my scariest moment to me.
>>> CORRECT
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