Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: How was your online learning experience?
A: In the first time, it was a very special experience for me.
I couldn\'t even expect that kind of way to study things, and our family also needed to prepare a lot of thing to attend to class.
But I think after few times, I got adapted to it.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. I couldn\'t even expect that kind of way to study things, and our family also needed to prepare a lot of thing to attend to class.
3. But I think after few times, I got adapted to it.
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some considerations:
1. In the first time, it was a very special experience for me.
>>It was a very special experience for me at first.
2. I couldn\'t even expect that kind of way to study things, and our family also needed to prepare a lot of thing to attend to class.
>>I didn\'t even expect that kind of way to study things, and our family also needed to prepare a lot of things to accommodate the class.
3. But I think after few times, I got adapted to it.
>>But after a few times, I adapted to it.
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