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2024-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Khai

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Managers should help and support their members to complete tasks responsibly. This requires responsibility as a manager and is meaningful. Managers must be good at self-management, have a good time plan, and keep the established schedules. On the other hand, a manager does not necessarily have a high salary. Also, sometimes you have to show a devoted side. It can lead to confusion in your personal life in that you have to adapt to changes and prepare for future situations.

강사 첨삭

You have shared the pros and cons of being a manager. Very good, Mia! ^^ Thank you for always being diligent in doing your homework. ^^
-Khai

Managers should help and support their members to complete tasks responsibly.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Managers should assist their team members to accomplish the tasks.

This requires responsibility as a manager and is meaningful. 

>> This is an important responsibility for a manager.

Managers must be good at self-management, have a good time plan, and keep the established schedules.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Managers should be well-versed in self-management and time management.

On the other hand, a manager does not necessarily have a high salary. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> In some cases, some managers may not have a high salary.

Also, sometimes you have to show a devoted side. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> A manager should be devoted to his job.

It can lead to confusion in your personal life in that you have to adapt to changes and prepare for future situations.

>> There are some instances where this might affect his personal life, as he has to be prepared and flexible for future situations. 


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