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2024-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Khai

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The role of a teacher is very important. Especially for children, the teacher\'s teaching is greatly influenced by them. A good teacher does not mean that a teacher is only rich in skills and knowledge. Teachers need to constantly communicate with students and have the wisdom to lead them according to their personal progress. It is even better if you are passionate about your subjects and can love your work.

강사 첨삭

You have given a detailed explanation, Mia. Well done! I definitely agree that a teacher should be passionate and loves his or her work.

-Khai

The role of a teacher is very important.

>> CORRECT
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>> A teacher’s role is very important.

Especially for children, the teacher\'s teaching is greatly influenced by them.

>> The children are greatly influenced by the lessons of a teacher.

A good teacher does not mean that a teacher is only rich in skills and knowledge.

>> CORRECT
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>> A good teacher should not only have skills and knowledge.

Teachers need to constantly communicate with students and have the wisdom to lead them according to their personal progress.

>> CORRECT
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>> They should ensure consistent interaction with students and discernment to lead their students.

It is even better if you are passionate about your subjects and can love your work.

>> It is even better if you are passionate about your subjects and love your work.

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