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Q: What are the benefits of attending traditional classes?
A: I think it\'s I can socialize with my classmates even if it\'s during classes.
There are some activities where I need to work in a group, and in those activities, I can socialize with my classmates and make friends.
Also, during breaks, I can talk with my friends and do activities.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think it\'s I can socialize with my classmates even if it\'s during classes.
>>I think it\'s being able to socialize with my classmates even if it\'s during classes.
2. There are some activities where I need to work in a group, and in those activities, I can socialize with my classmates and make friends.
>>CORRECT!
3. Also, during breaks, I can talk with my friends and do activities.
>>Also, during breaks, I can talk with my friends and do some activities.
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