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2024-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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Hello teacher How are you today? I hope to have a nice day Homework Where do you want to go in the future? My answer I will want to go to Canada and Cebu in Philippine in the future. because I will go to Canada in the Working holiday .and I wonder how pretty see in Cebu is

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름] [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. I\'m doing great.
I hope you have a nice day, too!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I will want to go to Canada and Cebu in Philippine in the future. 
>>I want to go to Canada and Cebu City, Philippines in the future. 

2. because I will go to Canada in the Working holiday.
>>I will go to Canada to work.

3. and I wonder how pretty see in Cebu is
>>I also wonder how pretty Cebu is.

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