homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, T. Sharon! This is my homework.
Koreans are proud of many things of Korea. There are some K-pop, K-drama... They have too many to tell about eveything.
So, I will tell you one thing, K-pop!
Once, K-pop was famous for BTS. But now, all K-pops are loved by people who love K-pop.
So, Koreans are proud of K-music!
Then, have a good night!
강사 첨삭
Hi Irene!
Great sentences!
I like the patterns that you used.
They would be very useful in your daily conversations.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Koreans are proud of many things of Korea.
>> Koreans are proud of many things in Korea.
There are some K-pop, K-drama...
>> Some of these are K-pop and K-drama.
They have too many to tell about eveything.
>> There are too many things to talk about.
So, I will tell you one thing, K-pop!
So, I will tell you one thing, K-pop!
>> So, let me tell you about one thing and that is K-pop.
Once, K-pop was famous for BTS.
Once, K-pop was famous for BTS.
>> Before, K-pop was famous only because of BTS.
But now, all K-pops are loved by people who love K-pop.
>> However, now, all K-pop groups are loved by K-pop fans.
So, Koreans are proud of K-music!
So, Koreans are proud of K-music!
>> Correct
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