Homework
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Q: Why do some people think it\'s not good to have a tattoo?
A: I think it\'s because they think it\'s unnatural.
I also think it\'s unnatural, but some people might think since it\'s unnatural thing, it could harm a person\'s skin or body.
Also, they might not like to look at them because it\'s unnatural.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. I also think it\'s unnatural, but some people might think since it\'s unnatural thing, it could harm a person\'s skin or body.
3. Also, they might not like to look at them because it\'s unnatural.
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~T. Divina
Here are some considerations:
1. I think it\'s because they think it\'s unnatural.
>>CORRECT!
2. I also think it\'s unnatural, but some people might think since it\'s unnatural thing, it could harm a person\'s skin or body.
>>I also think it\'s unnatural, and some people who agree might think that it could harm a person\'s skin or body.
3. Also, they might not like to look at them because it\'s unnatural.
>>CORRECT!
Note: If possible, you may use other vocabulary words that would match a word to avoid repetition (example: you may use some synonyms of \'unnatural\' in your sentences).
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