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I think if children very young they must not be allowed om social media sites. If they are 3~6 grade in elementary school I recommend not doing on social media sites.
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Hello, Henry!
I understand your concern. It\'s crucial to establish age-appropriate guidelines for children\'s online activities to ensure a healthy and safe digital environment.
~ Teacher Maxine
I think if children very young they must not be allowed om social media sites.
>> I think if children are very young, they must not be allowed on social media sites.
If they are 3~6 grade in elementary school I recommend not doing on social media sites.
>> If they are in 3rd to 6th grade in elementary school, I recommend not allowing them on social media sites.
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