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I think it would be better if spring disappeared.
Because spring and fall are disappeared
in Korea even now, and spring is too wintery.
Summer will come soon, so I think it will not be easy to
know even if spring disappears.
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If you had to eliminate one season so that it no longer existed, which would you choose?
I think it would be better if spring disappeared.
Because spring and fall are disappeared Summer will come soon,
>> I think it would be better if spring disappeared because if spring and fall disappeared, summer would come soon.
in Korea even now, and spring is too wintery.
>> In Korea, spring feels like winter even now.
so I think it will not be easy to
know even if spring disappears.
>> So I think it wouldn\'t be easy to know even if spring disappeared.
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