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학생이 쓴 원문
When we have a disaster, government inform to us by news or message immediately.
And we have a system called civil defense training.
Those who have been discharged from the military are receiving training to prepare for disasters.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
It\'s great to know that the government\'s way of disseminating information to the citizens is organized. Getting accurate information saves!
Have a great day!
Aki~
When we have a disaster, government inform to us by news or message immediately.
>>> When we have a disaster, the government informs us by news or message immediately.
And we have a system called civil defense training.
>>> CORRECT!
Those who have been discharged from the military are receiving training to prepare for disasters.
>>> CORRECT!
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