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What would you do today if there is no more tomorrow?
My dream is to be a surgen.
I will take a lecture going to any medical school for all day and observe a practic class.
Especially I wanna take an anatomy class.
I know it is impossible but I really hope to do that.
I am interested in medical science.
I surely wanna do that Before dying or disappearing this world.
I don't need money,honor and power.
If I accomplish to take a medical class or to pass the exam I wouldn't have any regrets if I died right now.
But proffesors maybe take a rest if there is no more tomorrow.
hahaha
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I really do pray that you achieve your dreams. You know what they say, if you believe and if you work hard for it, nothing is impossible. Good luck! ^^
What would you do today if there is no more tomorrow?My dream is to be a surgen.
>>My dream is to be a surgeon.I will take a lecture going to any medical school for all day and observe a practic class.
>>I will take lectures in any medical school for all day and observe practical classes.Especially I wanna take an anatomy class.
>>I especially want to take anatomy classes.I know it is impossible but I really hope to do that.
>>Correct!I am interested in medical science.
>>Correct!I surely wanna do that Before dying or disappearing this world.
>>I surely want to do that before dying or leaving this world.I don\'t need money,honor and power.
>>Correct!If I accomplish to take a medical class or to pass the exam I wouldn\'t have any regrets if I died right now.
>>If I accomplish taking medical classes and passing the exam, I wouldn\'t have any regrets if I died right now.But proffesors maybe take a rest if there is no more tomorrow.
>>But proffesors may take a rest if there is no more tomorrow.hahaha
>>hahaha.
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