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2012-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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What would you do today if there is no more tomorrow? My dream is to be a surgen. I will take a lecture going to any medical school for all day and observe a practic class. Especially I wanna take an anatomy class. I know it is impossible but I really hope to do that. I am interested in medical science. I surely wanna do that Before dying or disappearing this world. I don't need money,honor and power. If I accomplish to take a medical class or to pass the exam I wouldn't have any regrets if I died right now. But proffesors maybe take a rest if there is no more tomorrow. hahaha

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I really do pray that you achieve your dreams. You know what they say, if you believe and if you work hard for it, nothing is impossible. Good luck! ^^   What would you do today if there is no more tomorrow?My dream is to be a surgen. >>My dream is to be a surgeon.I will take a lecture going to any medical school for all day and observe a practic class. >>I will take lectures in any medical school for all day and observe practical classes.Especially I wanna take an anatomy class. >>I especially want to take anatomy classes.I know it is impossible but I really hope to do that. >>Correct!I am interested in medical science. >>Correct!I surely wanna do that Before dying or disappearing this world. >>I surely want to do that before dying or leaving this world.I don\'t need money,honor and power. >>Correct!If I accomplish to take a medical class or to pass the exam I wouldn\'t have any regrets if I died right now. >>If I accomplish taking medical classes and passing the exam, I wouldn\'t have any regrets if I died right now.But proffesors maybe take a rest if there is no more tomorrow. >>But proffesors may take a rest if there is no more tomorrow.hahaha >>hahaha.

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