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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the pros and cons of buying food from convenience stores?
Since experiencing the convenience store, there was become indispensable to me.
Because, most convenience store working for 24/7 and we can easy to enter because it\'s everywhere.
So, these days many people eat the meals at convenience stores.
I\'m also sometimes I eat the meals at there.
But, I think the disadvantage of convenience stores\'s food quality it\'s not good.
Because, there are not restaurant, they just sell easy cooking food.
And then, we spend more money than we expected.
The convenience store item are not cheap price.
So, every time I think \" I should to reduce going to convenience store \", but it\'s not easy.
Because, there have good access.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the pros and cons of buying food from convenience stores?
Since experiencing the convenience store, there was become indispensable to me.
Please answer the question:
What are the pros and cons of buying food from convenience stores?
Since experiencing the convenience store, there was become indispensable to me.
>> Since I experienced going to the convenience store, it became indispensable to me.
Because, most convenience store working for 24/7 and we can easy to enter because it\'s everywhere.
>> Because, most convenience stores operate for 24/7 and we can easily enter because it\'s everywhere.
So, these days many people eat the meals at convenience stores.
>> CORRECT!
I\'m also sometimes I eat the meals at there.
I\'m also sometimes I eat the meals at there.
>> I also sometimes eat meals there.
But, I think the disadvantage of convenience stores\'s food quality it\'s not good.
>> But, I think the disadvantage of convenience store\'s food quality is not good.
Because, there are not restaurant, they just sell easy cooking food.
>> Because, there aren\'t many restaurants, they just sell easily-cooked food.
And then, we spend more money than we expected.
>> CORRECT!
The convenience store item are not cheap price.
>> The convenience store items are not cheap.
So, every time I think \"I should to reduce going to convenience store\", but it\'s not easy.
>> So, every time I think \"I should reduce the times to go the convenience store\", but it\'s not easy.
Because, there have a good access.
>> CORRECT!
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