homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, T.Sharon! This is my homework.
I like korean instant cup noodles. They are so various and tasty. They are shared kind of taste.
I like spicy cup noodles, it always gives me happiness.
Bye Bye!
강사 첨삭
Hi Irene!
Please take note of the word positions in the sentences you use.
They would make more sense that way.
Try practicing this in the future.
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like korean instant cup noodles.
>> I like Korean instant cup noodles.
They are so various and tasty.
>> There are various kinds and they very tasty.
They are shared kind of taste.
>> Their taste is very familiar.
I like spicy cup noodles, it always gives me happiness.
I like spicy cup noodles, it always gives me happiness.
>> I like spicy cup noodles because they always give me happiness.
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