Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
□ What’s the most memorable vacation you’ve had?
- When i was 22,I went to cambodia as volunteer with my church Friends.
I Stayed in cambodia for ten days. i was very hard. because the weather was very hot and moist.
that was very hard vacation, but i feel many thing during help many people.
if i have chance, i want to go there as volunteer one more time.
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-T. Julia
When i was 22,I went to cambodia as volunteer with my church Friends.
>> When I was 22, I went to Cambodia as a volunteer with my church friends.
I Stayed in cambodia for ten days.
>> I stayed in Cambodia for ten days
i was very hard. because the weather was very hot and moist.
>> It was very hard for me because the weather was very hot and humid.
that was very hard vacation, but i feel many thing during help many people.
>> That was a very challenging vacation, but I experienced many things while helping many people.
if i have chance, i want to go there as volunteer one more time.
>> If I have the chance, I want to go there as a volunteer one more time.
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