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Q: Is it better to grow up in a big city or in a small town? Why?
A:I think it would depend on the people\'s lifestyle.
If the children want to live a life they can work in a company, it would be better to live in a big city.
And if the children want to live a peaceful life, it would be better to live in a small town.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. If the children want to live a life they can work in a company, it would be better to live in a big city.
3. And if the children want to live a peaceful life, it would be better to live in a small town.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think it would depend on the people\'s lifestyle.
>>I think it would depend on the people\'s lifestyles.
2. If the children want to live a life they can work in a company, it would be better to live in a big city.
>>If the children want to live a life where they can work in a company, it would be better to live in a big city.
3. And if the children want to live a peaceful life, it would be better to live in a small town.
>>CORRECT!
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