HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Happy thursday teacher~!
HOMEWORK:
[Writing Task] In three to five sentences (3-5), talk about the story or news you last listened to. Use as many adjectives as you can.
i recently saw crime news in online.
it is that the boyfriend kill his girlfriend. it was really cruel.
it started with argyment. continuously he claim it is unplanned murder.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름] Ji!
Thank you for answering your homeowork. I\'ve read it well.
Don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of the first word of a sentence.
I will talk to you again on Monday. Have a good weekend!
Practice English whenever you can.^^
__T. Mayleen :)
i recently saw crime news in online.
>>> I recently saw crime news online.
[CAPITALIZE]
it is that the boyfriend kill his girlfriend.
it is that the boyfriend kill his girlfriend.
>>> It\'s about a boyfriend who killed his girlfriend.
it was really cruel.
>>> It was really cruel.
[CAPITALIZE]
it started with argyment.
it started with argyment.
>>> It started with an argument.
continuously he claim it is unplanned murder.
>>> Continuously, he claims it is unplanned murder.
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