HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
[Creative Writing] If you could eat only one food for the rest of your life, what would it be? Why? Kindly answer in no more than five (5) sentences.
if i could eat only one food for the rest of my life, i will eating Kimchi fried rice.
i like eat pork,chicken,ramen etc. but i think i\'m sick of it.
i usually like eat kimchi fried rice.
maybe i think can eat longer than other foods.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] Ji!
(^__^)
Food is one of the basic necessities of life.
Food contains nutrients - substances essential for the growth, repair, and maintenance of body tissues and for the regulation of vital processes.
My kids and I also like kimchi-fried rice. It\'s delicious and easy to make.
Thank you for this composition. I will see you again in our next class.
Have a good weekend!^^
__T. Mayleen :)
if i could eat only one food for the rest of my life, i will eating Kimchi fried rice.
>>> If I could eat only one food for the rest of my life, I would eat kimchi fried rice.
i like eat pork,chicken,ramen etc. but i think i\'m sick of it.
i like eat pork,chicken,ramen etc. but i think i\'m sick of it.
>>> I like to eat pork, chicken, ramen, etc., but I think I\'m sick of it.
i usually like eat kimchi fried rice.
i usually like eat kimchi fried rice.
>>> I usually like to eat kimchi-fried rice.
maybe i think can eat longer than other foods.
>>> Maybe I can eat longer than other foods.
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