Homework
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Q: Do you think people will stop using cash in the future? Why or why not?
A: I think they might, but I think it will be a far future.
People still use cash because it can be easily trusted and it\'s safer because it\'s harder to be stolen.
Also, I think there are a lot more advantages of using cash.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. People still use cash because it can be easily trusted and it\'s safer because it\'s harder to be stolen.
3. Also, I think there are a lot more advantages of using cash.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think they might, but I think it will be a far future.
>>I think they might, but I think it will be in a far future.
2. People still use cash because it can be easily trusted and it\'s safer because it\'s harder to be stolen.
>>CORRECT!
3. Also, I think there are a lot more advantages of using cash.
>>Also, I think there are a lot more advantages in using cash.
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