Homework
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Q. Talk about story or News you listened to. Use as many adjectives as you can.
A. I saw the News about a terror in Moscow. 137 people were died because of the terror. The suspects were revealed 3 people from IS. It\'s SO terrible News. I want to see never again like this News.
강사 첨삭
Hello, June!
Thank you so much for finding time to answer your homework. I\'ve read it well.
The goal of terrorism is to provoke a generalized sense of unease and terror. This fear is not exclusive to individuals who are immediately experiencing the incident; it can spread quickly.
I have made some modifications that you can review later on.
Have a good night. See you on Monday!^^
__T. Mayleen :)
I saw the News about a terror in Moscow.
>>> I saw the news about a terror attack in Moscow.
137 people were died because of the terror.
>>> 137 people were killed because of the attack.
The suspects were revealed 3 people from IS.
>>> The suspects were revealed to be three people from ISIS.
It\'s SO terrible News.
>>> It\'s so terrible news.
I want to see never again like this News.
>>> I never want to see this kind of news again.
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