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I like badminton the most.
This is because the ball is light, so there is almost no risk of getting hurt.
It is also exercise because you use your body a lot.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your first corrected composition for this week, Luna.
I appreciate your sending it. See you on Wednesday!
Cheers,
Jean~~
What\'s the most enjoyable sport for you? Explain your answer.
I like badminton the most.
>> OR: I enjoy playing badminton the most.
This is because the ball is light, so there is almost no risk of getting hurt.
>> CORRECT~~
It is also exercise because you use your body a lot.
>> Playing badminton is also an exercise because you use your body a lot.
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