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2024-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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1.Another difference between these two _types_ of beer is the temperature of the fermentation process. 2. In addition, lager _tends to be_ lighter in color and body than ale. 3. Most beer in the United States is made by big breweries, such as Anheuser-Busch and Miller; micro brew or \"craft\" beer _count for_ only 5-10% of all beer produced. 4.However, the rapid _increasing_ in the number of microbreweries in the past 20 years means that the United States has a wider selection of beer styles than any other country. 5. In Europe, one of the smallest countries, Belgium, produces the _great_ variety of beer styles of all and is sometimes thought of as a \"Disneyland\" for beer drinkers.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] Su,

It nice for you to answer your homework. I do know that you have the potential in improving your skills in speaking English language.

Have a great day!!!!

T. Jeny


1.Another difference between these two _types_ of beer is the temperature of the fermentation process.
>>correct
2. In addition, lager _tends to be_ lighter in color and body than ale.
>>correct
3. Most beer in the United States is made by big breweries, such as Anheuser-Busch and Miller; micro brew or \"craft\" beer _count for_ only 5-10% of all beer produced.
>>correct
4.However, the rapid _increasing_ in the number of microbreweries in the past 20 years means that the United States has a wider selection of beer styles than any other country.
>>increase
5. In Europe, one of the smallest countries, Belgium, produces the _great_ variety of beer styles of all and is sometimes thought of as a \"Disneyland\" for beer drinkers.
>>greatest

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