Homework

2024-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Usually I stretch as soon as I wake up for my health. 2. I watched again the movie for the class homework. 3. I should try to speaking English for better than now to working holiday in Australia. 4. I should try to avoid strong-tasting food for speed up my recovering. 5. He wrote birthday letter for her.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su,

Good job for doing this homework. I really appreciate your hard work. ^^

-Teacher Ash 


1. Usually I stretch as soon as I wake up for my health.
>> Usually, I stretch as soon as I wake up for my health.
OR >> I usually stretch as soon as I wake up to keep my body healthy. 

2. I watched again the movie for the class homework.
>> I watch the movie again for my homework. 

3. I should try to speaking English for better than now to working holiday in Australia.
>> I should strive to improve my English-speaking skills for my working holiday in Australia.

4. I should try to avoid strong-tasting food for speed up my recovering.
>> I should try to avoid strong-tasting food for a speedy recovery.

5. He wrote birthday letter for her.
>> He wrote a birthday letter for her. 

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